Just A Little Bit More by Mychael Black
Just A Little Bit More, is what it is, a short-short erotic fiction. My main problem with this story is that the premise is interesting enough to have earned some further development. The BDSM component (which I’m not a big fan of) was made an essential piece of telling this story. Black incorporated the BDSM well. He used the D/s relationship to establish character, which is sometimes used as an afterthought. Clearly that was not the case with story, which would have worked better with “Just A Little Bit More.”
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